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i crumble to my knees
i miss you so much
you say its not forever
but further seems forever
we're miles apart
and we never talk
i cant see your face anymore
are you there anymore
i hurt in silence
i cry with ease
dont let me cry
when i love you the most
dont let me cry
when i miss you the most
you arent here
to comfort me as always
you came to me
when i felt it hurt
now i fall down
i reminisce
i miss you
i cant bear it all
but dont let me cry
dont let me cry
when i love you the most
©2004-2009 ~PuRAzN256
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grr...i dont want you to let me cry..not now...not when i love you the most....

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I like it! :D :+fav:

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The title is so simple yet it caught my attention when I was browsing. Just from the title I knew this poem would be emotional. It is and I love it! Good job! :)
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nice...

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they say...
i like being lonely...
i say...
Nah! i just like being alone!
:iconrikku42:
TT^TT
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alarm clocks kill dreams..O.o
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wow, i wish i could wrote this, i could try make it 2 a lyrics 4 song with the saddness that covers me.. wow..

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